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He wrote a letter
That still sits on his bed
Years after he put the pen down
"This life's too tough for me to handle"
He wrote in bright red ink
And everyone wishes he was still there

He disappeared somewhere in the West
It's been five years
They're still awaiting his return
Still expecting him
And little do they know
He's not around anymore

His possessions aren't around anymore
He gave everything away
Gave himself away
His room is empty
Save for that letter
That still sits on his bed

That letter still sits on his bed
Lonely and depraved
Getting older by the day
Slowly rotting as time goes by
And no one knows
What its fate will be
©2007-2009 ~TheIndependent
:icontheindependent:

Author's Comments

It seems to me like this one is missing a verse...any suggestions are welcome.

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:icon3cheers4myheart2die:
you need something at the very end. maybe about the guy that wrote it.. i dunno tho... its hard to put my finger on it. but i love it!
:icontheindependent:
I might edit it later, add something to it... Thanks!
:icon3cheers4myheart2die:
did i add to my favs?.. wait no i didnt i have to come back and get it! blast..

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August 29, 2007
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